Adventure Filming/Editing Techniques

I have been pushing myself to capture and create content from adventures I've been on recently, and would love some useful insights and critiques, as well as any ideas from this community.

Here is a link to one of my first attempts, a journey up to Angel's Landing in Zion National Park – https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=251odopHP_E&t=2s

What in there stood out to you? Would you have captured something you didn't see here? Or style wise, what are your thoughts?

My second film turned into more of a quick highlight, from backpacking in the high Sierra mountains – https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1k2qq_bKlTk

Both films shot on the Canon 1DX mkii, edited in Premiere Pro CC. Thankful for any time/feedback!