Starting to work with the Cinema 4D pipeline to After effects... any tips ?

So I ahve a Division themed video in pre-production right now and I was playign around in after effects to get some of that futuristic tech effects solidified.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/erjebnbuvygupv2/Comp%205.mp4?dl=0

Heres my attempt... I know its far from perfect but I was wondering if you all have any tips on how to make this look more believable as a hologram.

Cheers

-- Zac